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I graduated from Starfleet Academy in New York as the Only Romulan Who did pass. After i did i was promoted to the Field Rank of Ensign and transferred to the USS Exitor (Ambassador Class) and we were to Rondevous with my sisters ship the Xodus a romulan Warbird when the Xodus exploded after a Warp Core Breech i was to stay on the USS Exitor for 8 or 9 years when she was finally overtaken in Wolf 395 by the borg it was to be a Secret that we escaped but now i have been given Permission to Talk and then after i had to lead the ship to safety To Starbase 27 she was destroyed ny some kind of Temporal Anomele and i had to evacuate and was left to be found by the Uss Limburga whos captain was none other then Roy Veldman and he Graciously to me to Starfleet HQ where i was to be promoted to a Captain for showing great moral fiber at the Young age of 30 and give the Captain Ship of a Galaxy Class Starship and I was  Allowed to name her whatever i Pleased so I Commisond her the USS Kalour-A (NCC 980276-A) and then after my crew Came to Starbase 49 for a Little R&R she Was Sabotaged and Mr. Veldman didnt want this to look suspicious that the One of the Federations Finest Ships under the command of someone's Command that rivald Captain Jean Luc Picard Himself was Sabotaged at a Starbase that was under going a refit so my crew was stripped of Rank and was led to begin a whole new life untill Starfleet shows up and gives me another ship and of corse i have prooven my self to Capt. Veldman and got the Promotion to Assistant Chief of Stratigic Operations at the Rank of Ensign. And now do to some Glitch in my Genetics i was Turned into a Mere Human and before i was Romulan/Borg/Human and am now just plain human.
Please tell me what you think people i would like a review. rateings out of ten with a sentance or two telling how you ranked it and why.
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It's a bit far-fetched and it doesn't fit into the SB49 timeline. Wolf 359 hasn't happened yet, Romulans can't enter Starfleet Academy as far as I know, and it might need some more interpunction...
4 out of 10 at most...
Commodore Roy Veldman
1196 posts
oh well back to the DataPad
revised Version
I graduated from Starfleet Academy in New York with Superior grades and was promoted to Ensign. After that i came to Starbase 134 and there i worked as a Assistant Engineer and then after an almost fatal act by me that nearly killed the crew by thinking that i could install a warp Core on to the Starbase, halfway i didnt relize that the warp core had been rigged to Explode if it was to be installed but luckily i realized my mistake and Ejected it into space and used an old ship and used it to push the Core away before it exploded however that ship was destroyed in the process. I was Humiliated and was Stripped of Rank and luckily Roy Sympithized for me and gladly took me in but he didnt let me into that same department so he put me into Stratigic Operations because that was the other subject that i studied as a Secondary Course but he was Smart and made me prove my self before i got my Previous Rank back and prooved my self i have and I have been restored my old Rank but now Assistant Chief of Stratigic Operations and hopefully i dont wont need them for a while. and now i am a repected Officer on Starbase49. I am Banned from Engeneering unless they need my help.
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Interesting... why do you write that "...the warp core had been rigged to Explode if it was to be installed". Also, if such is the case, I question how likely it is that you would realize this before it exploded. You make it sound as though it was rigged to explode but had a warning tag on it that said "Warning: do not install or this will explode" and just as you were putting it in is when you realized "Oops, maybe that's a bad idea"
Otherwise I think it's much better (and much more plausible) than the other one. Neat bio.
Oh yeah, rating...I'd say maybe a 6. Just trying to be honest.
1196 posts
Well Thats the last time i trust a Da*n Ferengi  he said he bought it off a romulan well i should have known it was gonna explode
Hint: When i said i wont need them Lie I have to Plan Battles in The Dominion War
216 posts
Well a hink its quite gd actuallycos at least ensign tylers tried 2 make it more exciting cos trust me a cldn't write nehin lyk that
8 out of 10
Greg Campbell
Lieutenant
Chief Flight Control Officer
Starbase 49
1196 posts
yea not to bad huh... Grr Ferengi die
2175 posts
Zach, did you proof read your BIO?
Captain Taylor
Commander Starbase 49
1196 posts
No i didnt why what mistakes did you find??
1263 posts
This is so much cooler.
Zachary Tyler graduated from Starfleet Academy in San Francisco with Unusually high grades, specializing in warp theory. His first assignment was to Starbase 134 under Commodore Trevor, where he worked as a Junior Engineer.
Initially, he was praised, and was promoted to Commissioned Lieutenant within 2 years. One day, while supervising the warp core replacement of the USS Hotspur, he overlooked a number of simple safety checks, which lead to the Hotspur’s engines overloading when first brought online. Fortunately, there was a skeleton crew aboard, and most were evacuated and the ship towed out to space prior to its destruction. Due to Zach’s quick thinking, human losses were minimal, and only 28 people died.
Unfortunately, this was not enough to prevent the inevitable Court Martial. The panel found him guilty of many counts of negligence and the deaths of the hands of the Hotspur. He narrowly avoided Prison, but was stripped of rank, and for 3 years, he was assigned as an exhaust manifold scrubber at Jupiter station.
In his spare time he studied for Strategic Operations, and when he had served his time, he caught the eye of Captain Roy Veldman, who gave him the rank of Crewman, and took him to Starbase 49. Eventually, he was promoted to Ensign, and given the position of Assistant Chief of Strategic operations.
2175 posts
[tt]That is excellent Lieutenant J.G. Ashley Robinson!!
And Zach congradulations on over 1000 posts!!![/tt]
Captain Taylor
Commander Starbase 49
1263 posts
Why thank you Lieutenant Commander Taylor!!! Im proud of it :P
1196 posts
It Is Awsome Indeed.. I Like it.. Thanks Ashely Robinson