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Star Trek: Andromeda
  Pilot episode
(a new beginning with an old crew)
Characters:
Captain Xoah "12" Kirk (11-12 year old)( Jim Kirks Great-Great-Great-Great Grandson)
(Glasses, Fairly Emotional, Smart due to computer accident )Sr. Officer
Science Officer 1st mate Sakron (25-30yrs.)(Spocks Great-Great grandson) 1 third vulcan 1 third human 1 third Klingon Sr. Officer(White, Pointed Ears, rough Klingon Skin)
Chief Engineer MacDermot Scott(27-35yrs.) (Montgomery Scott's Great-Great Grandson) Sr. Officer ( likes to Drink)
Chief Medical Officer Andrew Mcoy (25-35yrs.)(Leonard Mcoy's Great-Great-Great Grandson)(jokester, fun loving)Sr. Officer
Jatari Sulu, Helmswoman (20-25yrs.)( Haikaru  Sulu's  Great-Great-Great Grandaughter)(collector,strict when time comes, follows orders without question) ÂÂ
Katra Uhura, Communications Officer (20-30yrs.)(Nyat Uhura's Great-Great-Great Grandaughter)
(understanding, strict when time comes)
Antonin Chekov, Weapons Officer(20-25yrs.) ( Pavel Chekov's Great-Great-Great Grandson)Sr. Officer (trys to make jokes, always looking for adventure)
Ships:
NX-01-X  U.S.S. Enterprise-X  4 Warp Naccels, Trans-Galaxy Warp Drive, Quantom Torpedoes, Quadra-Phasers, deflector shields, And over 2,000 People aboard.
NX-03 U.S.S. Excelsior  2 warp naccels with engineer pods, experemental Sega-Warp Drive, Quantom Torpedoes, experemental Hexa-Phasers, experemental Exo-beam  shields, And over 3,000 People aboard.
NX-1701 U.S.S. Deathshot 2 warp naccels, Trans-Galaxy Warp Drive, Quantom Torpedoes, Quadra-Phasers,Sentrum Cannons, Electro Pulsors, deflector shields, And over 2,000 People aboard.
VY-1701 A.I.S. Enterprise  2 Engineer Pods, Two Triga-Warp Naccels ,Non-experemental Triga-Warp Drive, Zecrom Torpedoes, Non-experemental Dodeca-Phasers,Non-experemental Trisom Shields, And over 4,000 Andromedians aboard.
VY-1702 A.I.S Revival  4 warp Naccels(with mini engineer pods), Two Triga-Warp Naccels (With Engineer Pods), Non-experemental Triga-Warp Drive, Zecrom Torpedoes, Non-experemental Dodeca-Phasers,Non-experemental Trisom Shields, And over 4,000 Andromedians aboard.
Scene one: hallway
Several people are walking through
McCoy looks puzzled at Xoah Kirk
McCoy: (looks at Kirk with a puzzled look) Since when does Starfleet let Unathorized Kids in?
Kirk: Kid?! Unathorized?! Ohhhhhh, your gonna get it buster!
I'm just as authorized as you.
McCoy: Show me some I.D.
(Kirk takes out I.D. and shows McCoy)
Kirk: I'm captain Xoah Kirk, call me twelve.
McCoy:(amazed)YOU, KIRK, (bursts into laughter And beckons to an admiral to come over). Admiral, is this kid authorized?
admiral: Yes he is.
McCoy: Where's his Uniform?
admiral: We allow him to  work without one, but he wears a ranking badge and patch on his clothing.
McCoy: (Jaw drops, eyes widen, and McCoy stares at kirk)
So You're the new captain of the NX-01. Welcome to Starfleet.
(End Scene 1, Go to theme song)
Scene  2: Interview Room
Outside halway shows many people walking by. Kirk walks in the door. Sakron is at the table.
Kirk:So...(searches through paperwork)Sakron, I hear you want to be the new science officer on the NX-01.
Sakron: Correct.
Kirk: I hear you are least recommended.
Sakron: Correct.
Kirk: Why is that?
Sakron: I have three moods. Logical, emotional, and power hungry. I have those three moods because I am part Vulcan, part Human, and part Klingon.
Kirk: So that's the problem. What is the average speed of a Klingon Bird of Prey?
Sakron: Speed, Warp 4.5
Kirk: How do you escape from a Tholian Web?
Sakron: Phasers Fire, Then Warp Speed
Kirk: What do you do when your Captain has the chicken pox?
Sakron: Report it to sickbay and relieve the captain of duty.
Kirk: Very Good. Report to the NX-01 at point 55 tommorow.
Sakron: Yes sir.
(End scene 2)
Scene 3: Enterprise bridge
"12" (Kirk) walks in
12: (cheerfully)Good morning. since this is a new crew aboard the NX-01, let's get to know each other. I'm captain Xoah Kirk, James T. Kirk's Great-Great-Great-Great Grandson. You can call me 12.
Uhura: I am Katra Uhura, Uhura's Great-Great-Great Grandaughter
Chekov: I am Antonin Chekov, Pavel Chekov's Great-Great-Great Grandson
McCoy: I am Andrew McCoy, Lenard McCoy's Great-Great-Great Grandson
Sulu: I am Jatari Sulu, Haikaru Sulu's Great-Great-Great Grandaughter
Scotty: I'm MacDermont Scott, Montgomery Scott's Great-Great Grandson
(all look at science station)
Sulu: (puzzeled)Where's our Science Officer?
12: He should be here soon
(door opens, Sakron walks in, Everyone stares at him)
Sakron: If you're wondering who I am, I am Sakron, Spock's Great-Great Grandson
12: Welcome aboard the Enterprise.
Uhura: Sir, Mission Breifing from Starfleet
Kirk: Onscreen
admiral: Kirk, we have intercepted a Klingon message saying that there is an invasion at Omega Sentra 9 led by Krytania at stardate ???????.??, we have decided to send you and several other vessels like the Excelsior, The Deathshot, and smaller vessels. Further data is being transmitted to your HUD computer.
Kirk: (presses a button on his glasses and looks carefully)(to admiral) Got it, Kirk Out. (to Sakron) Rally up the Sr. Officers in the Briefing room.
Sakron: Yes sir.
End Scene 3
Scene 4: briefing room
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Chief Science Officer
Starbase 49
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Sr. Officers sitting at table. Screen at front of room and on table.
Kirk: Okay, are we all here?
All: Yes!!!!!
Kirk: Good. Here's the briefing, A Klingon named Krytana is going to invade Omega Sentra 9 on Friday, we have 5 days to get there. There will be 2 other starships, the Deathshot and the Excelsior, and several smaller ships and shuttlecraft. We are the leading vessel. We have also charted strange ships and we have tried to establish communication. They might Rally to our forces. Any questions?(silence) Good! Now Battle Stations!!
End scene 4
Scene 5: Bridge
Kirk sitting in chair on something that looks like a phonebook. everyone is ready for command. veiwscreen shows Deathshot and Excelsior and smaller craft approaching.
Kirk: Uhura, establish communications with all other ships in mission.
Uhura: Aye, sir.
Kirk: This is your leading vessel's captain, Captain Xoah 12 Kirk. We will have to travel at an average speed of warp 4, but I will want warp 6.5 so we will have time to get ready, Kirk Out.
(scene shifts to space, two ships uncloak )
Andromedan Captain1: Follow them, but stay cloaked!
(End scene 5)
Scene 6: Galley
Sr. officers are eating, 12 pulls a bag of cookies with a note attached to them out of his pocket.
McCoy : (looks at cookies & note) Did your mom transport them with the mail?
Kirk: Yup!!
McCoy: Is that her letter?
Kirk: No, it's Natalia's
McCoy:(puzzeled) Natalia?
Kirk: We're good friends.
Scott: (quietly)  You can say it. She's your girlfriend, right?
Sakron:(human voice) He didn't say that.
Scott: It's obvious, She likes him, he likes her, can't you see that with your Vulcan brain?
Sakron:(sternly)it's one Third Vulcan.
Scott: Whatever.
Kirk: (presses intercom) Sulu, What is our distance there in percentage?
Sulu: 17% there. no ships in si... wait a minute, Klingon bird of prey just uncloaked, Get up here Captain!!!
Kirk: On My way!! (shoves cookie in his mouth)
End scene 6
Scene 7:bridge
Everyone is busy, door opens, Sr. Officers walk in
12: Sakron, are the shields up on that ship?
Sakron: Yes sir, she also appears to be arming torpedoes.
12: Chekov, raise shields and arm torpedoes and phasers.
Chekov: Aye sir.
12: Uhura, establish communications with enemy vessel.
Uhura:aye sir
Viewscreen shows that Bird Of Prey is transforming.
12:What in Warp is that!!??!!
Sakron: I believe that they are the unidentified ships we contacted.
Uhura: communications established.
12: Unidentified vessel, we are...
Andromedan captain1:The Starship U.S.S. Enterprise X. Yes We Recieved your message. we are the Kelvins, or as you call us Andromedans.
12: I Rember you somewhat. My grandad of the fourth generation encountered some of you.
Andromedan captain1: So you are Kirk's little boy. I think we will be able to work together.
12: So be it. (to Sulu) Warp 7!.
End Scene 7
Scene 8: Kirk's Quarters
(Kirk walks in and puts a disk in a space in the wall stage right. Kirk looks at screen. Girl [Natalia] appears onscreen)
Natalia: Hey Kirk. It's Me, Natalia. I Wanted to wish you luck at your first mission. Tell me when you get Shore Leave at Earth, Okay? Bye.
(Kirk presses button and looks into camera)
Kirk: Natalia, I have soooooooo much to tell you. I have already found some Aliens like us! I have a lot more to say, but I have to get to the bridge. By the way, I'll get back in 2 1/2 years. meet you at the Soda Werx when we get there.
Uhura: (through intercom) Captain to the bridge.
Kirk: Coming! (presses off recorder)
End Scene 8.
Scene9: Bridge
(Every one busy)
Sulu: Entering Sentra system.
Checkov: Quantom Torpedoes loaded.
Scott: Slowed to Impulse engine
Uhura: All other ships slowed to Impulse power and report ready.
Sakron: No Klingon ships in sector.
Sulu: Entering Omega Sector.
Kirk (12): Good.
Sakron: Nuetron Radiation surrounding us.
Kirk: Uhura, give me communications with all other ships. (into comm) All ships face away and phaser fire forward...... NOW!!!
(scene shifts to space, Many Klingon ships decloak)
12: Fire.
(damage to Klingon ships)
12:Fire at will. Maximum Shields!
(Scene shift to space and shows klingon ships being destroyed and federation ships being damaged. One shuttle remains.)
Kirk: Uhura, comunnications. (into comm) Remaining Klingon Shuttle, Prepare to be beamed aboard to our bridge, ... now.
(klingons and Krytana Beamed Aboard)
12: Pleased to meet you Krytana, you are a Worthy Opponent. (to Checkov) Checkov, escort them to the brig.
Checkov: Aye Sir.
End Scene 9
Scene 10: Hallway
( Krytana and assistants are being held by security officers)
Krytana: (Breaks free from officer)
Officer 1: (Reaches for Phaser)
Klingon 1: (Breaks Free)
All Klingons:(Break free and attack officers. Then Head For Shuttle bay Stage Left)
End Scene 10
Scene 11: Bridge
Kirk: (to Sakron) Well We Did Well, Right Sakron?
Sakron: (Power Voice) I have to hand it to you Kirk. You did well
Checkov: Sir, Shuttle departing
Kirk: Stop It!!
Checkov: Aye (presses button, Phasers Fire)
Kirk: Not That Way!! (to Uhura) Hail Them.
Uhura: Shuttle, Come back to the Ship immediatly.
Krytana: (Over comm) No, You got us this time, but we'll be back.
(Viewscreen shows Shuttle warping out)
Lt. Salikar
Chief Science Officer
Starbase 49
Back in Blue
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Andromedan Captain 1: Kirk, Would You and Your crew and ship like to come to Andromeda?
Kirk: How do we get there?
Andromedan Captain 1: Pump all Naccels to warp 10 so you will be at Warp 40.
12 (Kirk): That Could cause a Warp Core Overload.
Andromedan Captain 1: Trust Us.
12: Yes Sir.
(Scene Shift to space)
(Enterprise and Andromedan ships Warp out. Other Federation Ships veer off on impulse)
End Show 1
I have 2 more things that Im working on, A modified version and an alternate version
Lt. Salikar
Chief Science Officer
Starbase 49
Back in Blue
1263 posts
Lol just overload your warp core, youll be OK, trust the guy you met 5 minutes ago.
Very good stuff so far Salikar. Some crossovers seem a tad noobish, but this has potential.